lovely ringing thru the very california landscapes which is unusual here, the CA poetry we get in the UK is scarce & typically of the city. Tommy pico a possible exception but a very different world to brenda (& I don't want to end up conflating kumeyaay res & so on)

BUT BH is very neat & punctuative, she's playing concretely with the punctuation marks which I do enjoy & a couple FOUND erasures here I'm sure I've seen before